http://beasleyallen.disqus.com/enFri, 03 Oct 2008 21:03:26 -0000http://www.beasleyallen.com/video/asbestos-industry-quotes/#comment-2833940<p>Thanks for the feedback.</p>Scott ThomasFri, 03 Oct 2008 21:03:26 -0000http://www.beasleyallen.com/video/asbestos-industry-quotes/#comment-2833741<p>Interesting news but the presentation is not dramatic enough. I like the cemetary in the background but the location is not very impressive. My suggestion would be to shoot the cementary as a separate shot as you hear the person talking then fade in to your speaker as she is walking through the cementary then do a still close-up shot of her as she continues to read but don't show her reading the actual document. A close up is more personal and the distance shot is showing to much of her swaying. As she concludes, fade out and show the document in "bound legal cover" protraying a classified internal document and have her make a dramatic gesture with the document as she concludes. As your fading out you're picking up the cementary in the background.</p><p>You asked for a comment - you got one.</p>Jack Fri, 03 Oct 2008 20:35:52 -0000